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I'm gonna begin with saying that I really enjoy the idea behind this one. A showcase of all the transformations in Shantae's last game,...


I'm gonna start off with the fact that I believe this is a really nice approach to this particular scene from the game itself. The angu...


I might not be the best kind of visionary for technique and style in artwork, but I'm gonna try my best to give you a critique worthy o...

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This is a really nice little comic, as far as ecchi material goes. There's a nice concept behind it, a little confrontation and a sexy ...

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Dancing Memories 3 - The Last Duel :iconincredibleintruder:IncredibleIntruder 24 7
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Drifting thoughts, part 6
An analysis of some old concepts, yet with a renewed perception shaped by new experiences
It has been a long while since I wrote one of those, as even though I've talked about several concepts and how I approach them through my work and my understanding of things, those little entries were done back then, when I was a different person. What I mean by that is that, of course, we are all shaped by the various experiences we go through in our life and thus we change and adapt constantly. Unless we are kept by routine or are unnaturally stable with our everyday habits, the person we are today and the person we were a year ago are different, sometimes vastly so, as due to events, projects and experiences that we go through. With this being said, I think it's time to use yet another chapter of Drifting Thoughts for me to get a grip on what is happening and what might happen on this page, but also in my life. I hope you're ready for another pseudo-philosophical ride.

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Shantae: Dancing Trance
*This is a sequel to another story of mine. I would suggest you read it before reading this one: *
Self-doubt was most assuredly her worst enemy.
As she moved in the backstage of the dance parlor, Shantae felt a tinge of anxiety in her throat and her stomach, as she knew she'd need to perform once again, trying to keep up with the reputation she had gained. Despite the fact that she had vanquished the Pirate Lord, saved Sequin Land too many times to count and fought monsters twice her size, she always had that little fear lodged within her gut that made her slightly hesitate to get on the stage. They all loved her, of course, and that little concern would be reduced to naught when the spotlights would be on her, yet there was always this nagging little thought that dragged her upbeat attitude down.
What if she made a mistake?
Always shouldering huge responsibilities and taking it all upon itself when danger arose, the quiet moments like these
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The Gerudo Era, part 12
It had been a long time since she had been free like this.
After watching the now-liberated Link get out of her tent, Nabooru felt a little troubled at what she had done and what she believed had been done to her. With mixed feelings about using this ancestral and dangerous technique, even for beneficial purposes, the unease she felt would not go away as even though she had probably helped a great hero in his time of need. It was not the fact that she could have messed him up even more than he already was or that she could relate to his plea even when he was under her control. What disturbed her most was the fact that she had, deep in her mind, enjoyed the performance she had put. Even though she had been brought in a trance against her will for so long, there had been a definite thrill to what she had done, to the way Link had been subjugated and seduced by her prowess, on how he couldn't resist her dance. Was it a curse for the Gerudo to be able to dance and enslave people, to make t
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How Tuki got her groove
All was peaceful and quiet in Scuttle Town...
''You can't fire me!''
For the most part, as the citizens strolled by the marketplace, making their best to ignore the sudden outburst that came from the item shop, the place of interest for adventurers and explorers alike.
''No, ssseriously, you can't fire me!''
The loud voice, coming from the back-store, startled most of the customers as the shopkeeper, embarrassed, tried to calm things down with the demanding and loud source of this outcry, a snake-woman of unknown origin that had bizarrely appeared in town, to no one's notice save for the shopkeeper himself.
''Where will I go? What will I do? I'm ssso close to my dream, I can almost tassste it! You can't do thisss to me!'' she complained, standing as tall as she could to look intimidating despite her flustered manners.
''You're right, Tuki, I can't fire you,'' the shopkeeper said, sighing a little as he looked at Tuki's smiling and radiant face as he announced that. ''Technically, you'r
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The Gerudo Era, part 11
Shehra followed the Goron to the cave where Goron City was, in awe. Link was his name like her father’s? It made Shehra wonder much about him. “Um, L-L-Link?” she asked, hesitant to call him that considering the strangeness of the situation.
“Yes?” Link the Goron replied.
“I’m curious, where did you get that name from?” Shehra asked.
“My father gave it to me. He named me after the great hero of the Gorons who killed off the Dodongos and returned out main source of food back to our people,” Link replied.
“And who is your father?” Shehra asked.
At this, Link paused bringing his hands to his now hung-down head where he was rubbing his eyes as he began to cry, an act that caught Shehra off-guard. The Gerudos were a tough and firm people, not much of a crying type, but she figured that whatever had happened in this city involved this young Goron’s father. She had to get him to settle down if she was to get any ans
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Life has a funny way to slow you down at times, especially with unexpected events.

A few weeks ago, I was rather pumped to try to get back in a writing mood, submitting two new stories in a short amount of time. I had fun trying to get back in the thick of things and I was ready to continue, to get my groove back on as far as erotica-writing was concerned.

Then the fire nation attacked...

On a more serious note, I had a sudden pain in my left wrist and I went to see just what it was. Turns out, I had a tendinitis and I needed to let it rest for a while, between two and three weeks. I had a brace, I had some ibuprofen and I needed to let it heal as best as I could. Thus, writing was not really a possibility for the time being, be it for my own projects or for my own amusement. As such, I need to return to this activity and get my discipline and my typing up to snuff. I'm gonna try to write some more, though progress might be a little slower for a while. I still have some more chapters of ''Downfall of a heroine'' to write and I have some ideas on the side which might end up getting put on the page or not, depending on my mood.

Sorry for the inactivity, though.

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AoiInji Featured By Owner May 17, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the fav :la:
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You're quite welcome. :)
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I don't do requests. Thanks for your enthusiasm, though.
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IncredibleIntruder Featured By Owner May 15, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
No I'm not.
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J4RRE77 Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Nya, what's up, doc?
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IncredibleIntruder Featured By Owner May 13, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Plenty of stuff like a tendinitis to my left wrist and work. You?
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J4RRE77 Featured By Owner May 14, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Did you read my latest journal?
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The stuff about your grades?
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Thanks for watching :D
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You're welcome. :)
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Hoping you had a happy birthday!:)
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