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And thus, the adventure continues as we get back to the Gerudo Fortress, to see just how Namira's decision will be received. Plenty of drama, action and even a tiny bit of hypnosis in this one! The collaborative effort between 
and I continues as this one was written by me and checked up by him.
However, this is one of the last chapters that were prepared in advance. Thus, updates on that storyline might be slower from now on. It'll still be worked on, of course, but the rhythm of a chapter per two days surely won't be kept up.
In any case, enjoy this newest chapter.
Comments, as always, are more than welcome.
and I continues as this one was written by me and checked up by him.However, this is one of the last chapters that were prepared in advance. Thus, updates on that storyline might be slower from now on. It'll still be worked on, of course, but the rhythm of a chapter per two days surely won't be kept up.
In any case, enjoy this newest chapter.
Comments, as always, are more than welcome.
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Ah, another great chapter. Looks like things are definitely drawing to a head here. Sounds like the game is about to change from Ocarina of Time, to Hyrule Warriors! *grin* I suppose I can kinda see Whyita's point... Link did get pretty much "emasculated" in this series, and as I stated before myself, female dominant stories tend to rub me the wrong way anyway. But I agree with you in this--- for a story to truly pop you have to bring your heroes low for them to rise to greater heights. You have stated again and again that Link and Zelda will both get their chance to shine and this chapter certainly seems to be setting up for it!
By the by, you certainly know how to make things interesting! Link showing the power and strength of his Courage, and 'Fiora' showing the depth of her skill and Wisdom. Both still mind controlled slaves, yet still able to show their individual traits. Still, I have to wonder how they will both react as they travel, as they begin to see the devastation that has befallen Hyrule under G-man's rule while they were living in mindless bliss in the servitude to the Gerudo. Link, at the very least, will have to realize that he could have stopped it if he'd completed his quest... and that guilt will definitely sting.
My concern, however, is Fiora/Zelda. As part of her enslavemet, her past, her very identity was taken away from her... yet she remains the embodiment of the Triforce of Wisdom. As the rightful ruler of Hyrule, being connected with the land, she will either sense of feel that connection and realize what she lost, or be reminded in the midst of battle the more she and link use their talents--- still waiting to see what a mindblow it will be when Link breaks out the Ocarina Zelda gave him! Worse case scenario, when Ganondorf shows up and the Power, Courage, and Wisdom are all together in one spot should reveal her true self.
Also.. skipping the kids completely at the moment, assuming that Link DOES survive everything coming their way, and defeats Ganon yet loses some others along the way... he DOES have the Master Sword and the Ocarina. So there's also the possibility for him going back in time to his youth and untangling/fixing the timeline if worse comes to worse. Without guessing where you plan to end the series, it gives you a handy dandy "reset button" if needed. And if Namira has truly come to love her devoted Fiora and Link, she may send him back to fix things once she realizes how much taking them off their chosen path has affected the world.
Well... I've blabbed on long enough. Just wanted to say again that I am liking this series very much. Lots of intrigue, lots of potential, and lots of action. Keep it up!
J.D.
By the by, you certainly know how to make things interesting! Link showing the power and strength of his Courage, and 'Fiora' showing the depth of her skill and Wisdom. Both still mind controlled slaves, yet still able to show their individual traits. Still, I have to wonder how they will both react as they travel, as they begin to see the devastation that has befallen Hyrule under G-man's rule while they were living in mindless bliss in the servitude to the Gerudo. Link, at the very least, will have to realize that he could have stopped it if he'd completed his quest... and that guilt will definitely sting.
My concern, however, is Fiora/Zelda. As part of her enslavemet, her past, her very identity was taken away from her... yet she remains the embodiment of the Triforce of Wisdom. As the rightful ruler of Hyrule, being connected with the land, she will either sense of feel that connection and realize what she lost, or be reminded in the midst of battle the more she and link use their talents--- still waiting to see what a mindblow it will be when Link breaks out the Ocarina Zelda gave him! Worse case scenario, when Ganondorf shows up and the Power, Courage, and Wisdom are all together in one spot should reveal her true self.
Also.. skipping the kids completely at the moment, assuming that Link DOES survive everything coming their way, and defeats Ganon yet loses some others along the way... he DOES have the Master Sword and the Ocarina. So there's also the possibility for him going back in time to his youth and untangling/fixing the timeline if worse comes to worse. Without guessing where you plan to end the series, it gives you a handy dandy "reset button" if needed. And if Namira has truly come to love her devoted Fiora and Link, she may send him back to fix things once she realizes how much taking them off their chosen path has affected the world.
Well... I've blabbed on long enough. Just wanted to say again that I am liking this series very much. Lots of intrigue, lots of potential, and lots of action. Keep it up!
J.D.